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[angelicgemini]

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Hi Everyone. 

It's me, while I left you all I tried improving my writing skills to the point of it being good.  I hope it is, or if it's a failure like me tell me.  I know it isn't good, but I would like good feedback and criticism.

[redperil]

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Hi Everyone. 

It's me! After I left you all, I tried improving my writing skills to the point of a pencil.  I hope I have succeeded, but if it's a failure, like me, tell me.  I know I've a long path to travel, but I would appreciate feedback and criticism to help me on my way.

You used the word good on three occasions, within the space of two lines. Repetition of the word will not make it so 
Be original, be explosive, be you, be good  Any help I can offer, just call. Excuse my little bit of fun, and welcome back.

RP

[angelicgemini]

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Sorry about that, usually when I do introductions, they are pretty much like this because I like being more creative in terms of my constructive criticism.  Oh well, thank you redperil, and long time no see.  It's been ages since we last chatted.  Can't wait to hear more advice from you.  Thank you so much for everything.  I wrote a poem, if you want to read.  But, I am happy to be back here after so many years.   

[Jenifer]

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Ah don't sweat it.

Hang out and have a good time.

Post, critique, get better.

That's why we're all here...