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« on: November 08, 2009, 11:17:18 PM »

'Advancing on Chaos and the Dark',
     acting from ones true heart

'Transcendent Destiny, not a cowards fleeing',
      most assuredly, this is my part.


Inspired from reading Ralph Waldo Emerson's
Self-Reliance
Essays: First series (1841)
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Essay II  Self-Reliance
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A story derives from the writer's perceptive observation and careful report of scene and from structural discipline.
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« Reply #1 on: January 28, 2010, 11:03:58 PM »

I think it has legs.
It doesn't really need the disclaimer at the end.

And thanks.
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« Reply #2 on: February 04, 2010, 11:12:56 AM »

I'm sorry Nick, but I don't get it.  It's not doing anything for me and it feels lazy.

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« Reply #3 on: February 04, 2010, 02:09:53 PM »

Warm fuzzys. Old/new feel. No disclaimer. Reminds me of that guy I wrote something about which you've read but more positive. You should check him out.
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