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« on: January 08, 2012, 10:09:05 PM »

Two years ago,
shock, anger, grief,
tasted like salt,
But I did it for you.

Today,
I wonder
if you know
the last thing I told you
was a lie.
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"If you can promise me anything, promise me that whenever you're sad, or unsure, or you lose complete faith, that you'll try to see yourself through my eyes. Thank you for the honor of being my wife. I'm a man with no regrets. How lucky am I. You made my life, Holly. But I'm just one chapter in yours. There'll be more. I promise. So here it comes, the big one. Don't be afraid to fall in love again. Watch out for that signal, when life as you know it ends. P.S. I will always love you." ~Gerry..PS: I Love You~
 
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« Reply #1 on: February 25, 2012, 03:36:01 PM »

Brief, like I like them.... Bukowsiesk..... Like I like 'Um.....
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"How vain it is to sit down to write when you have not stood up to live"- H.D. Thoreau
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« Reply #2 on: February 27, 2012, 08:08:42 PM »

Nothing to really dislike here, but I definitely didn't feel any sense of completion. Maybe this is the beginning of a longer piece poking its way out of your brain?  Tips Hat
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