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« on: April 23, 2011, 03:30:03 PM »

Prehensile mouth chews -
sounds like lame rhino in mud-
teeth glare jealousy

young, yet has jowls wrinkles,
sniffs rose, rhino-like – why? thinks
she's cuckolded wife.

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my sister in law is the only person in the world I can't stand.
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« Reply #1 on: April 28, 2011, 09:59:01 PM »

oh.  it's like LANGUAGE poetry!
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« Reply #2 on: May 07, 2011, 03:56:09 PM »

There's a funny old musician called Baby Gramps who does whole songs like this. I could see it working as a spoken piece (probably just because I like Baby Gramps!) but on paper it doesn't rouse me- not my cuppa cha as they say.
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