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LiteraryMaryWriting and Random Creativity Workshops Poetry and Lyricspaper dimple flat.
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« on: August 31, 2010, 05:26:57 PM »


(note: about the experience of folding origami)

paper dimple flat. 


i roll the unspine dry              stick her down we shot
the fleet that dingy sticky please put it down so oversized
pocket marks shrink and shapes that blink cursor see me punch a
hole in my conch from ear to hear I am locked in remember these
pipe dreams saving ten gallons hold it sold it four puff huff
the fingers crease that cold blooded oblong filigree. 
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« Reply #1 on: September 01, 2010, 05:13:07 AM »


o.k.
i donnow what is it there
is it my english or.....

 
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it sold it four puff

- should that be 'for'?

this no-break style doesn't help.....

sorry
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not finished, not polished. but here..

"Words rarely express the true meaning; in fact they tend to hide it."
(H. Hesse)

"Master the masters and serve the servants" (Flow)

"before every 'but' stands a lie" (Osho)

opinions are like ass holes - everybody got one

"It is forbidden to kill; therefore, all murderers are punished unless they kill in large numbers and to the sound of trumpets."
(Voltaire)

it is just me, just now
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