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elphyon
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« on: July 11, 2011, 12:20:14 PM »

darling, would it be alright if I
held your face against my face
like two-faced mooners that we are?
tonight I don’t want your
love, I don’t want your
sex, I just want to
inhale
the fuzz of your neck
like fumes from sky burning at dusk,

and why not? why why why,
half the world’s gone rabid
with one or the other— which
are we darling?
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« Reply #1 on: July 11, 2011, 05:12:24 PM »

I don't want your sex
I just want to inhale the fuzz of your neck

Further intimacy would entail swapping chromosomes.

Nice one, elphyon.
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« Reply #2 on: August 02, 2011, 06:10:32 PM »

Thanks Nick. Appreciate your readership.
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« Reply #3 on: August 07, 2011, 11:39:31 AM »

sometimes during sex my boyfriend will come out with really cheesy poetic lines like 'I love our bodies in rhythm with each other.'

I reply by 'FASTER..  OMG... FASTER...'
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« Reply #4 on: August 11, 2011, 05:33:40 AM »

Like it simplicity.
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